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kool....i like it...bzz
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GOSH DARNET!!!!! I DIDN'T GET 1st COMMENT but thats ok personally i lyk the first and second chapters best but i still think its very lovley haha i said lovley...and i could soooooooooooo picture my self saying that hahaha i♥you ~!!!~ERin~!!!~
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I NEED MORE! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
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wow i LOVE your story its great oo cant wait for the next chapter haha im gonna add u if u dont mind AWESOME STORY!! ive been reading it and well its great i could never have written something like it
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OMG!!!! i need more of this story to read!!! is awesome!! i love all the chapters!!! great job!!!
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Disenchanted ch. 6I woke up early the next morning in the arms of Gerard. He was still asleep so I slipped out of his arms quietly, got dressed, and went into the kitchen. Kaylana, Ray, and Mikey were the only ones awake. "Hey Lizz." They all said. "Hey guys." I said back. "Well, looks like everyone got busy last night!" Ray said. "Huh?" "Well, you and Gerard did, Frank and Erin did, Kaylana and I did, and of course Jordyn and Mikey did, but..." Ray trailed off. "Did Bob and Kay... you know...?" I asked. "I dunno. They seemed like they were, but it could've just been talking and making out." Ray said. "Hey there's Jordyn. Be right back guys... or not." Mikey said, got up and walked over to Jordyn. "Hey baby." "Hey!" They started kissing. "So... is Gerard still asleep?" Kaylana asked me. "Yeah. I wore him out." Kaylana and I laughed like the best friends we are. And then Erin came in. "Hey Erin!" Kaylana and I said to her. "Hey guys." She said sounding wiped out. "Did you and Frankie have fun last night?" I asked. "OH YEAH!!!!" Erin yelled. She's so funny. Eventually, everyone woke up and the guys ended up talking to the guys, and the girls ended up talking to the girls. "Hey girls," Frankie said to us and stood on the table. "The guys decided that tonight we are gonna go out and have some fun. We're having a dudes night out!" All the guys agreed. "Ok then." All the girls agreed too. So the hours passed and it came to the time that the guys were about to leave. "So where will you guys be going?" I asked Gerard as they were about to leave. "I dunno. Some bar I think." "Ok Gerard. Don't get too drunk, ok?" "Ok I won't." "You promise?" "Yes I promise." He kissed me quickly and then left. Yet even though he made that promise, I knew something bad was going to happen. sorry it took so long! i couldnt think of anything to write!! but i got it now. theres big stuff comin up!!!!! tell me what you think!!! love you guys!! -XxElizaXbethxX
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